Saturday, 19 November 2011

What is love

What is love
Love is magical
Sometimes you can feel it and sometimes you can't
But it is always with you.

Love is a lighthouse in the sea
It can illuminate the front route for us.

Love is a pair of eyes
It always helps us to gain a glimmer in dark night.

Love is a nascent bud in spring
It comes with wishes.

Love is an air-conditioner in  summer
It comes with comfort.

Love is a harvest in autumn
It comes with joy.

Love is charcoal in winter
It comes with warmth.

Love,a captain,
controls our life and mind.
What is love,
Love is magical,
Love is all.

5 comments:

  1. Great poem. I liked how you compared love with the lighthouse in the sea.

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  2. I realized that you are a very romantic guy. I saw that you have desire to fall in love with someone! hahahah

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  3. This is a very nice poem. Good job

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  4. I found the metaphor about love being a nascent bud in spring interesting...
    Continue working on making sure your expression is clear by editing for grammatical and mechanical errors as it helps us understand your ideas better.

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